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TheVanguardIssue1page06

Jan06
by macadmin on January 6, 2011 at 4:29 pm
Chapter: Issue 1 - The Pickup
└ Tags: adventure, comic, sci-fi, superhero, vanguard, webcomic
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  1. MisterTeatime
    September 5, 2011, 9:00 am | # | Reply

    Brown sky. Now I get it.

    Lots of expository thought balloons here. I think some judicious use of Thenurion’s amazing vision for close-ups of things we can only see in the distance here might help to eliminate those- we could see a closer view of debris with burn marks and a shorter caption like “Weapons fire- that explains what happened to the beacon…” for example- but if Thenurion is just a think-things-through kind of guy, then this might be more in character. Can’t tell yet.

    One thing about the last panel- the motion streaking makes his body and left arm look like he’s moving, but the unstreaked right arm (his right, not ours) looks like it’s standing still, which feels awkward.

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